Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. Discuss the causes and solutions.
With the development of industrialization, the average quality of life for all human beings has increased dramatically. However, for those who live in big cities, living quality starts decreasing recently. In this essay, I shall examine the reasons why this is happening and possible solutions for the problem.
To begin with, the population grows significantly and the cities become more and more crowded due to urbanization. The living costs for a person in a city is much higher who located in the countryside because they need to struggle for valuable and rare resources like houses, food, and education, etc. Also, the environment makes a big difference to one’s living quality. People in the city are suffering all kinds of pollution from the air, water, and sounds, which impact their health negatively. Last but not least, the overwhelming stress on the city people’s shoulders affect their mental health.
Fortunately, there are various ways that the government can do to boost people’s living conditions. First of all, satellite towns can be built up around big cities to disperse the overcrowded population. Secondly, the government should promote the development of public transportation and encourage people to drive less. By doing this, the environment would be improved by reducing the emission of harmful gases. Finally, more laws need to be activated to secure people in cities in order to prevent mental illness.
In conclusion, although the quality of life in large cities is a serious issue around the world, if the above steps are taken, the situation will surely improve in the coming years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33461538462 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.969878367 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630769230769 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8356406565 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0714285714 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136295497233 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439665455729 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491837446775 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944468006198 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545480487272 0.056905535591 96% => OK
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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