In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack suppor because of their parents’ absence.
In modern world, it is not only women’s duty to take care of her children, sacrifice her social life and also her career. However, neither it is not man’s duty to take care. Hence it is considered that both parents are responsible for their children, they should equally support children while committing social life. For this reason, in answering this question, I am hundred percent agree with the statement that both parents are necessary to go out to work. I have three essential statement to support my opinion.
First of all, it is true that if both parents work the income will be more sufficient to grow in good living condition, good education and good health. For example, these days most parent’s worries about education of their children, and definitely enormous tuition fee. As a result, they might choose cheaper choice with guilt. But if both works, there is no need to worry about the guilty choices.
Secondly, home-staying mother might have considered as good example. Even though, children tend to choose their role model other than their mother, they will probably choose the one who is more successful. Hence to become a role model to our children, it is essential to work successfully. For instances, children will be more motivated how both their parents working successfully while balancing work and life.
Lastly, both parents working does not mean they have no time for their children. If they can balance the schedule, it is more decent condition to live happy with good education, living condition and good mental health. One example is my own life. Both my partner and I work as full time, and we also balance family time and work time. I think I have no feeling about lack of support to my child because of my absence in 8 hours a day.
In sum, the statement about lack of support because one parent is working is not critical issue if we only can manage time. However, if parents cannot manage time and working till dawn to dust, it will be warning sign of lack of support to the children.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ther it is not man’s duty to take care. Hence it is considered that both parents are ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... choose the one who is more successful. Hence to become a role model to our children,...
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...own life. Both my partner and I work as full time, and we also balance family time and wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, as a result, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77272727273 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45469670199 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491477272727 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.841177436 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310230623033 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900350569447 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076015336116 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171566702479 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176866691275 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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