Today’s teenagers have more stressful lives than previous generations.
Discuss this view and give your own opinion
Today’s world has many detrimental impacts on the way young adults live their lives. This essay will discuss why teenagers these days are under more stress than their preceding generations, and give a concluding opinion.
Probably one major cause of this issue is the wide use of social media websites, such as Facebook, Twitter and Instagram. While surfing these websites most of their time, adolescents often come to social posts by friends and strangers about their lives. These posts can have negative effects on teenagers’ minds since they potentially show the ideal version of how those people live. While the youngsters, in many cases, cannot interpret this particular information, they may think that the life is always straightforward, and thus being stressed of not living that ideal version of life.
Another factor can contribute to teenagers’ stressful lives is the competition with their contemporaries. The academic life where students are driven by the desire to achieve high grades in order to enter their dream colleges is an instance of these competitions. In addition, youngsters may even think of the highly competitive job market and how they should be prepared, from younger ages, to meet those expected jobs requirements. Such thoughts, although they seem to be motivating, can increase the levels of stress amongst young persons.
In conclusion, I agree with the opinion that today’s life can put young adults in more stressful situations compared to past times. Taking the considerable time spent on social media and the competitive lifestyle into consideration, adolescents will suffer from stress in various aspects of their lives.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46946564885 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95960065862 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637404580153 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5672073744 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.416666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246154706192 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925600031969 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0985456503676 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170563620364 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110252070613 0.056905535591 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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