Today’s young generation is facing many problems’ in school and at home. What are the problems, what can parents do to help their teenage children?
It has been universally acknowledged that the adolescents are facing several issues at school as well as at home is escalating at an alarming rate in the current scenario. This problem has been of a depressing magnitude. Although a plethora of reasons are there, some sensible solutions are also available to curb this grave concern.
Commencing with the causes which are responsible for the growth of it. The first, encountering from the schoolmates that is bullying. Children getting bullying from the senior students makes them feel depress and also alters character of children that makes them hurt, therefore, less interest in going to school and hence, in studies the second contributing factor is persuading of parents to compel in different activities adding pressure to children, for instance, parents want their child to achieve first in every activity even though they are not interested. This undergo children in stress and makes them uncomfortable even at home. In addition, nowadays children lack security even from the peers and family members has become an another problem making them lessening in confidence and leads in apprehensive situations.
To solve this serious issues, some measures can be taken. Firstly, school authorities should strictly prohibit the bullying in schools. Moreover, if they transgress should be informed about what punishment would be going to face. So that, to a large extent some of this can be solved. Secondly, in order to solve by family members, parents must have better bonding with children which assimilate that can be share anything openly between them whatever happens. Moreover, parents must explain about good and bad touch to their children.
Parents should provide better awareness to them whenever they want such as counseling. In addition, in advance parents should teach children, how to tackle and cope with any issues that they might have confront in their teenage lives.
To recapitulate, unquestionably, this problem has become serous with children. However, in my perceptive proper understanding, acknowledgement between parents and children would mitigate the issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 735, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a problem' or 'another problem'.
Suggestion: a problem; another problem
...the peers and family members has become an another problem making them lessening in confidence and...
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Line 4, column 202, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'confronted'.
Suggestion: confronted
...pe with any issues that they might have confront in their teenage lives. To recapitulat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45180722892 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8193414677 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578313253012 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.920923336 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.555555556 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250791291121 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701339596831 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452103487802 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128375755436 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168500553021 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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