In today's world of advanced science and technology, we still greatly value our artists such as musicians, painters and writers. What can arts tell us about life that science and technology cannot?
Nowadays, we all are living in an era pervaded by the dominion of the science but, despite all the achievements granted by the scientific culture, the arts are still crucial because they play a great role in understanding the human nature, which is something that goes beyond the technique and it is not understandable by the machines.
All the people all over the world experience the same feelings, such emotions are so powerful and, basically they determine our choices and, ultimately, the destinies of the society. Although they are so important, they cannot be measured in a objective way, only the arts can materialize them in touchable artworks. For instance, when we watch a comedy at the cinema we laugh because the actors are capable to convey their emotions to us. There is no way to explain the beautiness of the nature, but some paints are capable to provoke the same sensations of a majestic landscape. In other words, the creativity is the only resource to externalize the most profound feelings, that are the only skill that the machines will not be able to imitate.
In fact, the computers are becoming more and more powerful, and they can do very complex task by their own; but those achievements are the result of a mere computing capacity, not even close to produce something that can be defined as "creative". Even if there are software capable to recognize a song, there is not a single machine who can create a melody, so the capability to create and understand the beauty will always be the peculiar characteristic of the human specie.
To conclude, I believe that all the true nature of the humanity is perfectly express by the arts, and the creativity is something that make humans unique even in the technologic era.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, for instance, in fact, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90879127245 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546666666667 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.075644493 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.666666667 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.3333333333 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116284686012 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421278385532 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033978955737 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0623193833292 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343702019032 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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