In today's world of advanced science and technology, we still greatly value our artists such as musicians, painters and writers. What can arts tell us about life that science and technology cannot ?
In this cutting edge generation, there is an equal importance to artists as well as for technology. The artists in this generation such as singers, sketchers and authors are getting a warm desirability even though in hi-tech science and technology.
Perhaps the most compelling reason about arts is it creates beautiful thoughts in life with the positive feelings in the work culture, which we are doing in our daily life. If this is the case in any surroundings then a good workflow can start, jobs going to increase and the economy will not shrink. This would lead to a good financial condition with a happy, joyful, cherish lifestyles.
Although emotions are not only things that can change life through artists. Another important segment artists can give through their art performances is conveying a social message with love and respect to people. The most obvious benefit of this is it leads to change in society, which in turn leads to no detrimental attitude and no health problems. But there is another, deeper, benefit to life through artists is self-satisfaction, which is that we can do full time job as artist.
However, artists can tell about life in various ways while science and technology can not. The more technology that developed in this generation which leads to artificial intelligence industry. The major drawback of this tech industry is it can not create artists: talent cannot be judged by technology. If this would be the case in technology for life then artists are virtuous, righteous and lawful.
In conclusion artists are made up of talent which can give meaningful answers to life. There is a huge difference between artists and technology especially in one's personal views. If technology could change human life through artists then that would be great.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, well, while, as for, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10810810811 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76914941069 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540540540541 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1476719766 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.5 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259165528112 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899766709073 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069523641374 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147753257396 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454294192492 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.