Topic: International travel can make people prejudiced rather than broad minded. Why people fail to benefit when they travel? What we can do to improve their understanding of the countries they visit?
It is true that foreign travellers nowadays have a bias against these countries which they come to instead of broading minded as well as they fail to benefit when they travel. There are various reasons for this, and there are also many solutions should be taken into consideration to address this problem and improve it constructively.
Firstly, foreign tourists have a prejudment when they travel must be due to the lacking of critical thinking skills. They just see one side of an issue and they have no thinking positive sides. To solve this problem, people are encouraged to learn about critical thinking skills. In particularly, students at schools or universities should be taught intensely. For example, those should be provided more subjects using critical skills like debates or writing essays. As a result, they will perceive the world more fairly.
Secondly, the cause leading to have a bias when people travel abroad would be cultural shocks. This is because they have never seen these foreign cultures, and these are completely new for them. Therefore, that make people fell down in feeling and take a comparison with their own countries.In this situation, previewing the culture of foreign countries before traveling could bring effective results to visitors. For instance, travellers should read more handbooks about cultures and exprience of famous trvellers. As a consequence, people are well-prepared and they are likely to accept new things.
Finally, the last reason for this problem is that these visitors cannot fully understand the issue because they cannot speak foreign language. This means that they cannot communicate with other people and cannot understand the full sides. To address this problem, many people in the world are encouraged to study foreign language before they travel. In particularly, it is English language, because English are widely used in many coutries. Consequently, they can understand the foreigners when they have to know somthing.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are different reasons for travelling foreign countries with falling out of the benefits and possible approaches should be considered to takle this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44444444444 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71470049277 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5296252022 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2352941176 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9411764706 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.82352941176 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317376264767 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108026711674 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799249441311 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191114788488 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587077859998 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.