In recent decades ,there has been considerable debate regarding the role of international tourism.It regarded thoroughly as positive and constructive by the number of people.I firmly concur with the opinion of taking measures against prejudiced thinking.In this essay , I will elucidate the roles of international tourism that how it affect the mind of peoples.
To commence with, it is palpable that every nation has their own culture .But the main cause of this rising problem is people find it hard to adapt their diverse culture .As tangible example ,in Vietnam cow slaughter and cow's meat edible is permissble and understandable by their government but as Indians use to worship cows they criticize it and rise the feeling of hatred.From my personal experience, a qualitative research was conducted by an eminenet sociologist to explore further the limitations and restrictions.Final results revealed that there is highly complex relationship between the understanding of people hailed form different countries even though all the tasks and policies should be taken into consideration.
Furthermore , we could be prompted some measures to get rid of prejudiced thinking.Foremost,whenever we make the plan of international tour, we need to confront with their culture first .It will stabilise our thinking ,or will not let the worse feeling to be arisen,lessen the communication gap etc.we must aware about their customs and their dressing style .
To recapitulate , according to the preceding discussion ,I am inclined to the notion of develop the feeling of spreading love to the people of other country.It is also intrinsic that they must also dissed them and welcome them warmly.Efforts from both sides will definitely inhance tourism ,peace and prosperity among all nation's.
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- International travel can make people prejudiced rather than broad minded. Why people fail to benefit when they travel? What we can do to improve their understanding of the countries they visit? 77
- Some people believe that laws changr human behavior.Do you agree with the opinion? 77
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- Company top-level authorities should or should not take employees suggestions or ideas to take any decisions. Discuss. 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50545454545 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36222114549 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676363636364 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 20.2975951904 335% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 163.706100986 49.4020404114 331% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 378.5 106.682146367 355% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.75 20.7667163134 331% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13151961478 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689013631531 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279109394459 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0689013631531 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279109394459 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.9 13.0946893788 297% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -6.0 50.2224549098 -12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 11.3001002004 274% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.86 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.35 8.58950901804 144% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 10.1190380762 289% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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