The debate whether or over the adventurous activities like extreme skiing and bungee jumping is an old one, with the attitude of people shifting throughout the debate over years. Proponents and opponents make their cases to endorse their views on this contagious issue. In this essay, I will analyze this matter from both point of view and then draw a conclusion at the end. In my opinion, the onus should be on the government.
There are numerous arguments surrounding my viewpoint that people who employed themselves in these activities gets into plight of loosing life at any time but the most important factor that needs to be considered relates to the rewards that are offered on these actions. In other words, persons just to show their abilities or for the sake of price money put their life into risk. To elaborate further, few pertinent examples can be taken into consideration and this is my own personal experience when I went to Manaali for vacations I went through these moment in which a boy was badly wounded and he was hardly getting special treatment.
On the other side of the fence, critics also believed that persons need to embroil in these activities to confront their fear unless they could never evacuate their hidden talent. However, those who advocate this viewpoint are fail to see the picture in this large context. The other school of thoughts is these activities should be promoted only when they have been doing into experts area and completely safe. It is proverbial that there are myriad of chances to convene ordeal.
In the light of above discussion, it is fair and justifiable to say everything should be experienced but under the proper fostering.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 550, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this moment' or 'these moments'?
Suggestion: this moment; these moments
...to Manaali for vacations I went through these moment in which a boy was badly wounded and he...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93006993007 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55701287287 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618881118881 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9251239986 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0744990634997 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0243779423651 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556834662108 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0420344108397 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465740678491 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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