The debate whether or over the craziest fan-following of sport stars and films stars among youngsters is an old one, with the attitude of people shifting throughout the debate over years.
Proponents and opponents make their cases to endorse their views on this contagious issue. In this matter I will analyse this from both point of view and then draw a conclusion at the end. In my opinion ,the onus should be on the government.
There are numerous arguments surrounding my viewpont in which one is about the running after the fame of filmy stars.It not a benevolent for a new generation because all the stars are not impeccable.They inspire peoples only on the screen but youngsters start following them also in real life, that deterrent them to live in their existing values.in other words people also perceived their false image ,they amalgamate their all images in good one.
To elaborate further , few pertinent examples like some stars really becomes an inspiration for example Amitabh Bachan , Amir khan who always deliver a message through his films that inspire the new generation.
On the other side of the fence critics also believed that all the sports stars are not audacious , sometimes they misguided youngsters through their heinous actions. However, those who advocates this matter fail to see the picture in the large context.
The other thoughts of school is youngsters follow their idol like no other one but sometimes it all act as a gimmick .
In the light of above discussions it is fair and justifiable to say that one should follow the right path ,as being rational citizen ,all the exaggerations should be avoided, judicious and pragmatic should be taken into deliberation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, then, for example, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 282.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09219858156 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67897890382 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631205673759 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.944986117 50.4703680194 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 143.6 104.977214359 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 20.9669160288 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.25397266985 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.12807881773 170% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.33497536946 225% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0323563543903 0.242375264174 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0116798155628 0.0925447433944 13% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0188247842134 0.071462118173 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0150918529092 0.151781067708 10% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180776617092 0.0609392437508 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 53.1260098522 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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