International travel can make people prejudiced rather than broad minded. Why people fail to benefit when they travel? What we can do to improve their understanding of the countries they visit?

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...rding the role of international tourism.It regarded thoroughly as positive and con...
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...ng measures against prejudiced thinking.In this essay , I will elucidate the roles...
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...icize it and rise the feeling of hatred.From my personal experience, a qualitative r...
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...th sides will definitely inhance tourism ,peace and prosperity among all nations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, regarding, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48363636364 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36222114549 2.71678728327 124% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 139.433497537 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676363636364 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.6157635468 217% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6551724138 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 20.5024630542 332% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 163.706100986 50.4703680194 324% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 377.0 104.977214359 359% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.75 20.9669160288 328% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.25397266985 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.33497536946 506% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155540631558 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800941605104 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326874779505 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800941605104 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326874779505 0.0609392437508 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.8 12.6369458128 307% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -6.0 53.1260098522 -11% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.54236453202 243% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 10.9458128079 283% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.69 11.5310837438 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.35 8.32886699507 148% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 55.0591133005 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.94827586207 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 10.3980295567 281% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.