The debate whether or over the companies’ decisions taken on the suggestions of employees is an old one, with the attitude of people shifting throughout the debate over years .proponents and opponents make their cases to endorse their views on this viewpoint .In this matter , I will analyse my viewpoint from both sides of it and then draw a conclusion at the end.In my opinion ,the onus should be on the government.
There are numerous arguments surrounding on my viewpoint is that top level companies usually don’t depend upon employees to convene a demand .all the companies have their owns blueprints which is being followed. It is sometimes becomes intrinsic to have a rational suggestion of employees but the most important factor that needs to be considered relates to economic condition of the company. In other words when a company has all the gimmick resources, then suggestions don’t matter anymore.To elaborate this viewpoint, few pertinent examples related to the hike of the companies due to the deliberation of employees suggestions like when a company faces a dire condition, it likes to involve other otherwise they keep them poles apart.
On the other side of the fence, critics also believed that the notion of taking suggestions depends upon the ordeal of the company. However ,those who advocate this viewpoint fail to see the picture in the large context.
The other thoughts of school is sometimes employees based decisions become contentious.
In the light of above discussion it is fair and justifiable to say that cooperation and shrewdness is a panacea. So it depends upon the demand of the company.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17910447761 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91048392093 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585820895522 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.610484158 50.4703680194 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.222222222 104.977214359 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7777777778 20.9669160288 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193354095297 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638664297755 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447127282542 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787211965104 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437207325595 0.0609392437508 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 12.6369458128 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 53.1260098522 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 9.94827586207 261% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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