In recent decades, there is a considerable debate regarding the role of Euthanasia. I firmly concur with the opinion of the notion to accept it while others think it against the human rights. I will elucidate this issue from the both point of view. In my opinion , the onus should be on the government.
To commence with, i like to raise that point however we became modern and world has changed its norms but we can't deny that we belong to the country which still ensued superstitious ways. Most of the people here doesn't support it because they consider it against the willness of a person and nobody has right to bring this henious step into their's life. From my personal experience , a qualitative research was conducted by an eminent sociologist to explain further the rights and liabilities of a person. Final results revealed that there is highly complex relationship between the death and untimely death even though all the evolved values should be taken into consideration.
furthermore, it is not wrong to say that peoples suffering with the non-panacea diseases requiers relief. For example , in Sydney 15% of beds of a hospital is occupied by the patients of comma and the large amount is being paid in the form of taxes, NGO's and government .For an instance, a quantitative research was carried out by Melbourne university to bring all limitations.
To recapitulate , i am inclined with the preceding discussion that having kind of sympathy that is not worthwhile and panacea. It is also true that providing euthanasia to someone is strenous act but it could save them from unbearable pain.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, still, while, for example, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93726937269 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79367408193 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642066420664 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8521570453 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.085734922548 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0284729936218 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282346750884 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0502385829771 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408664222276 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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