In these days, some people are dreaming to set up their own business; however, others tent to occupy in companies or organization.
As far as to being self-employed is concerned, this determination could be beneficial to become self-employed. It will not easy to get on with unreasonable colleagues. Therefore, when someone works for a company has to come up with his colleagues, whereas if someone had his business, he would lay them off.
Furthermore, earning a lot of money would entice everyone to think about work for himself. Considering money that companies like the google and the apple making each year is huge, and no wonder the numerous people working in these companies are seduced by thinking about the earning number, and finally quite their job to run their own company or start up.
On the other hand, running a privacy company is a arduous chore. Firstly, the cost of running a business or small start ups can be overwhelmingly for a number of them. At the beginning, every businessman needs some capital investment some of which do not afford, so they have to take out a loan from banks. If the things will not go very well, they are going to face loan repayment problems, and even worse through a bankruptcy. In addition, a number of start ups need take on some employee to start work. Although they are not profitable firstly, the co-founders have a commitment to pay wages regularly no matter what is the financial situation of company.
In conclusion, numerous reasons exist to have your business than work for a supervisor such as having more income and freedom; however, never they should think that running a business is a simple deem because there will be some financial problems and job pressure.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 49, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ther hand, running a privacy company is a arduous chore. Firstly, the cost of run...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85762711864 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79559303537 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603389830508 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4888053311 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.230769231 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212572138654 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722714838898 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106332222523 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112057980336 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787846269234 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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