The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The pictures show the development of the airport site for one year. Overall, there will be too many changes in the airport site, including the outside way of the site is going to expand and a sky train will be replaced into the walkway.
By looking at site facilities now, there is just a cafe on the right side of the site, exactly, across to check-in. While many facilities are predicted for next year, such as car hire, ATM, and cafe on the right side of the site and another cafe and bag drop side on the left. However, the shop on the left side of the site will be demolished, and also the initial check-in will not have changed until next year.
The number of entrance and exit doors is going to increase as double as initially, and also the number of gates will increase to 18 gates, which are just 8 gates.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, so, while, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 663.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30519480519 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16674018497 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2739280489 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188243509089 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105102125891 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495595356999 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114383941211 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666147368249 0.0819641961636 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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