In today’s society, the increasing crime rate is considered to be a pressing issue that many countries are facing. Some people think that the benefit of a prison sentence outweighs other punishment, Although the benefits of this are varied, the drawbacks, in my opinion, should be paid more attention to.
On the one hand, putting these culprits in jail has several advantages. Firstly, for civilized societies, justice must always be delivered, the criminals must be paid for their sin and they should be put into prison to increase the safety of society, Imprisonment can isolate offenders from society, and they do not have the change to commit crimes again. Besides, when criminals are jailed, the victims feel trust in the legal system, otherwise, these victims will lose trust in society and can cause many personal revenge actions and may make social disorder. Secondly, this kind of punishment would be a good example for would-be criminals who do not dare to commit crimes when thinking about life in prison.
On the other hand, compare with other kinds of punishment, imprisonment has some drawbacks. First of all, it could be remarkably costly to manage the prison. Governments have to invest a considerable amount of money and other resources to keep the inmates. Secondly,It is unreasonable to impose a prison sentence on all levels of crime, some types of petty crimes may consider probation instead of imprisonment since imprisonment can result in a -size-fits-all approach, which may harm petty crimes. Thirdly, the prisoner has lacked education and training, therefore, they are difficult to integrate into the community. Research shows that most prisoners commit crimes within a year of release and unable to find a job.
In conclusion, although there are still some disadvantages of imprisonment, I think the advantages of this punishment are still outstanding and still useful in modern life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, third, thirdly, i think, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23376623377 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85169196683 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584415584416 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3226856034 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155768480306 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500790638008 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517019009665 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797656611538 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543630448325 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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