Topic:
Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. what are the main problems people in cities face, and how can these problems be tackled
In recent year, living in metropolises has been increasingly challenged. There are many problems that the inhabitants in major city can face, but this might be dealt with a lot of solutions.
It is clearly that the cost of big city is higher than that in remove areas. Urban dwellers usually have to pay higher price on accommodation, food and transport. For example, the fee to rent a house in Ho Chi Minh city, is approximately twice as high as that in other provinces. so many people, who live in large city with the low-income, become homeless. Another issue is that the air pollution in large metropolises, due to an increasing traffic congestion and construction. As a result, the cities can be harmful and unhealthy because of many health problems such as pneumonia and lung cancer.
However, these problem can be tackled by many effective measures. Firstly, people can share their accommodation with their friends and colleagues. For example, I and two friends of mine are renting a house to live that make the price cheaper than I rent alone. Secondly, government should reduce tax on petrol. This does not only make people use less private car but also make people use more public transport and electric vehicles. By doing this, the air quality in urban area can improve significantly.
In collusion, the life in big cities is very difficult because of higher price and congestion. But the suggested answer above can help to solve it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ght be dealt with a lot of solutions. It is clearly that the cost of big city ...
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...ms such as pneumonia and lung cancer. However, these problem can be tackled by...
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...pneumonia and lung cancer. However, these problem can be tackled by many effective measur...
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...urban area can improve significantly. In collusion, the life in big cities is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93495934959 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79321245616 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617886178862 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4843700144 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.875 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.375 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311901740187 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845742120393 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782274395751 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173352229936 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280230617852 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.