Tourism is encouraged in many countries. Does tourism bring more advantages or disadvantages to a country?
Due to reduction in air fares which provide huge opportunities to humans to commuting in various nations as tourists. However, tourism have uncountable measures like contribute to country’s economy, decrease unemployment, introduce new cultures as well which offers so many benefits to regions in several ways.
The main bright side of tourism is that it assist the nations to increase dramatically their economy because a majority of countries fully dependent on tourism. For example, Thailand, Marcuse and Bali are highly depend on tourism and are tourists friendly regions as well. In addition to this, when visitors comes in tourism countries than host nations receive foreign currency which enhances their economy conditions. Moreover, the reason is that commuters pay taxes on living places, foods, goods, transports, medicines and so on facilities which leads to rising income in tourism nations.
Furthermore, the another major pros of this perception is that number of visitors visiting in the tourism regions which help regimes to reduce unemployment. Even though, if a vast amount of tourists will be coming in various tourism nations than authorities will need lots of staff to handle them. For instance, in hotel where tourists staying required more employees to provide better services to their customers like that transport agencies, tour guide companies and etcetera also demanding more staff which steady decline unemployment among countries. In other words, the visits of commuters in tourism regions helpful for both to gain profound knowledge about each other’s cultures which attached them with each others. Last but not least, the people not only get culture knowledge but also pay respect to another cultures and build strong relationships.
In conclusion, although, air travelling help masses to cover long distances within short time periods. Due to these, lots of nations motivating tourism to earn more wealth so that is why more and more tourist commuting to another countries. Beside that, these aid them to make strong relations with others which spreads positive impact on globe.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
..., Thailand, Marcuse and Bali are highly depend on tourism and are tourists friendly re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in short, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51219512195 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72488668316 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618902439024 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7966771252 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.142857143 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22912863617 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799207367906 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068929147973 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142362943889 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038665353577 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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