Tourism is encouraged in many countries. Does tourism brings more advantages or disadvantages.
There is no doubt that many nations are giving more important to tourism. As it is advantageous for many reasons such as to enhance the knowledge of people about various historical and religious places. However, the demerits of tourism cannot be overlooked which is proving risky for other countries.
To begin with, a number of benefits can be highlighted by encouraging tourism in various countries. tourism promote equilibrium between the mortals who are from different backgrounds and socio-economic groups, as they travel together on some beautiful places. Also, the counties give golden opportunities to tourists to escalate their wisdom about different rituals. United state of America, for example, are granting tourist visa to other nationalities so that they can come across multiple languages and customs.
Moreover, some countries are eager to improve their economic conditions for maintaining the historical and religious buildings. Therefore, they allow folks to come and enjoy to see the various wonderful places by paying entry fee which can be utilize for the renovation and adding new attractive things in ancient buildings.
On the contrary, some of the cons of tourism could not be neglected. Because some terrorists enter in other sovereign states by explaining the purpose of tourism, which seems to be harmful for the prosperity of countries. Additionally, some people who visit to various places do not care about the beauty of the place and throwing waste materials anywhere which affects the attractiveness of tourist places.
In conclusion, the administration of nations ought to give permission to tourists only after proper verification that they are general public as well as fined to them if they are causing harm to the cultural places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42960288809 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9365740255 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581227436823 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4554161342 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.692307692 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6923076923 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182055704063 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802423938497 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876884594507 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102109266288 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10201887549 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.