Tourists are becoming able to come to thorough insights into distinct type of places which can be related to their own nation and also can be international. Due to this, they are creating a lot of benefits in comparison with the obstacles for the government by enhancing the level of economy as well as better opportunities.
To commence with, the economic structure of a peculiar nation is ameliorated upto a high level. As, the currency notes are exchanged between the two nations which automatically up the foreign exchange position of these two nationalities. For instance, India is become able to take a better position in the international exchange market especially through the Taj Mahal which is considered the seventh beautiful tourist place all over the world. Consequently, the legal authorities can utilize this particular revenue on the other development sectors in an efficacious manner.
In addition to this, the tourism sector is also created a lot of opportunities for the business by developing its scope. This is because, the tourists are come from the tourist places.So, at that moment, it is become essential for them to stay in the near about restaurants. For example, in Thailand, the people are liking to come there which progressively elevate the popularity of hotels by enhancing its revenue as well as its goodwill.
To conclude, the disadvantages are not completely occurring in this case. Although, a numerous people are preferring to go outside the country and to visit the beautiful place but, on the other hand, the government should also try to maintain the tourist place's value in its own residents.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ation is ameliorated upto a high level. As, the currency notes are exchanged betw...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on is ameliorated upto a high level. As, the currency notes are exchanged between...
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Line 3, column 552, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an efficacious manner" with adverb for "efficacious"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...evenue on the other development sectors in an efficacious manner. In addition to this, the tourism s...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...urists are come from the tourist places.So, at that moment, it is become essential...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...s. For example, in Thailand, the people are liking to come there which progressively eleva...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... this case. Although, a numerous people are preferring to go outside the country and to visit ...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...st places value in its own residents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17602996255 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02910364071 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573033707865 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6006554521 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.636363636 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0171049071614 0.244688304435 7% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0082203830926 0.084324248473 10% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0259951338118 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00987749572257 0.151304729494 7% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.017108324443 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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