Tourism has increased so much over the last 50 years that it is having a mainly negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment. However, others claim that it is good for the economy.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give your own opinion.
In this day and age, an increasing number of people are concerned about the increase in tourism over the last 50 years, which is thought by some people to be a negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment, however, others consider that it can be good for the economy. There are some obvious merits of this phenomenon but there are also some stumbling blocks to be taken into account.
On the one hand, there are a number of advantages to tourism. One evident strength is job opportunities for people. This means that it is the appearance of new jobs that helps people earn more money to spend on their daily demands such as food or clothes. Other industries, therefore, will be accelerated to develop consequently. Another positive feature is the improvement in infrastructure. For instance, run-down road systems and public transports, by being upgraded regularly by local goverment, will attract more foreign visitors. In addition, tourism, with a great number of tourists, definitely boosts the national gross income. In other words, the profit from tourists support other industries and even generate more businesses such as accomodations for tourism.
On the other hand, there are some obvious disadvantages that would arise. One weakness is pollution. Simply put, the overcrowded visitors carelessly leave garbage which may cause the environmental issue desperately. Take some historical sites in the world as an illustration, they are deliberately damaged by tourists due to the fact that some visitors throw litter around the sites or draw graffiti on the wall. Another reason is the disappearance of culture. Alternatively stated, indigenous people will adapt with new cultures rather than keep their own customs because of the mass tourism. Moreover, the increase in tourism may lead to the destruction of natural habitats. In particular, excessive buildings for tourism industry may result in the extinction of a great number of animals and plants.
In conclusion, there are plus points to tourism. However, the downside would emerge consequently in terms of pollution, the disappearance of culture and the destruction of natural habitats.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, may, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35087719298 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98920804355 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570175438596 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.590797876 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216169065456 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574853220946 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680500697262 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121854557345 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558656560654 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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