Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving companies, factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?
Every part of world big cities encounter population explosion. Consequently, residents have faced the amount of issues such as traffic, dwelling issues and pollution due to teeming and industrial factories. There have some solution which is evacuate companies, plants as well as their workers to the countryside.
First and foremost, A large number of pollution caused by only big factories. Industrial pollution can influence health by introducing harmful particles that can become suspended in the air as well as the heaviest materials that remain on the surface, contaminating soil and groundwater. Sources of pollution have increased dramatically since the industrial revolution due to consumer demand and reliance on conventional energy resources such as coal and oil. For instance, In 2013, Some researchers study found that nearly 200,000 people die each year from air pollution alone. Pollution is often worse in developing countries. Thus, Companies and factories ought to move out to far away from city.
On the other hand, Nowadays, the majority of people encountered to lack of job position as companies are more likely to hire less employee in big cities. In rural area, people don't enjoy to get job despite of profession avoidance. For some example: Dwelling issues and traffic occur in ulaanbaatar mostly. Since , mongolian non-urban area have no opportunity to get job. As a result, Many people people prefer to live in urban area rather than rural side. Thus, factories and companies have to move to the countryside in order to less traffic and unemployment.
In conclusion, The biggest problem can solve easily. If the establishment moves out with their employee, Big cities lifestyle can improved in some area
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...portunity to get job. As a result, Many people people prefer to live in urban area rather tha...
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...ment moves out with their employee, Big cities lifestyle can improved in some area
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, so, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34065934066 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90698871838 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600732600733 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.81251342 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7647058824 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0588235294 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132691075106 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427899570971 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479490137748 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892447154342 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458183753978 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.