As transport and accommodation problems are increasing in many cities, some government encourages businesses to move to rural area. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages.
With the economic and rapid urbanization, more and more people are now rushing in to big cities, which has imposed a huge pressure on the urban housing and traffic. As one of the solution to this problem, the government encourages business to move to rural area. If this policy of demographic shift is on the official agenda. This essay will examine both sides of the argument before conclusion is drawn.
Admittedly, there are some argument in favor of business would move to rural area for solve problem of government. First, the virtue of higher living standards, people nowadays have a tendency living in big cities and this cause traffic jams or lack of housing, lack of jobs. In particular, cities have many jobs or opportunities jobs than countryside so people is concentrated in the city under the pretext of making money, thereby, potentially could become over-reliant on the state, meaning that there would be less input to develop other areas on a country such as healthcare system and public infrastructure. With many disadvantages of traffic jams and housing shortages, solutions for this problems of government is actually will give advantages in this life is relocating business to rural area, which benefits society in the long run. In fact, it is acknowledged that housing problems of people and economy is imperative to control economic growth and technological development in any nations. If the authorities can’t control these systems now, it will give many people problems in the future.
Nevertheless, the resultant problems would be far more significant than the minor once government will move business to rural area. First, all business move to countryside would likely correspond with a tremendous financial strain in a company. In the cities, not enough area for increased traffic and housing, meaning that the countryside can’t bring in enough business from city too much at once. Second, it business move to rural area and company would pay itemized for building business in countryside including office design or build out and migration costs as well as ongoing month costs such ad taxes, sent, permits. Therefore, this is the what most companies in urban areas would not come to terms. Especially, building factory will need more money if this company want to building is fast. It, instead, would be a more financial viable option if company have sufficient funds for migration.
I was discussed both sides of the argument. In my perspective, this problem have merits overshadow demerits.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, well, in fact, in particular, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2117.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 410.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16341463415 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81196242136 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517073170732 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 669.6 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.2562386562 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.421052632 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5789473684 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63157894737 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279632902926 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887240324219 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104097924979 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149667083235 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765797426476 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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