The trend of online shopping is increasing significantly. What effect does it have on the environment and society in general?
Technology is “ boon and bane” for human beings in this high- tech epoch. Presently, most of masses are passionate in order to buy distinct kinds of things through online shopping. Therefore, the trend of e- shopping is gaining prevalence swiftly all over the world. Here, I would like to account for effects of this happening on the environment and society.
There are manifold negative outcomes of this trend on the community. First and foremost, people attain an opportunity in order to become extravagant if they purchase products by e-shopping. For example, nowadays, majority of top level national and multinational companies promote their products by several shopping sites such as amazon, jabong ,flipkart and so on. Hence, the majority of folks have tendency to visit online shopping sites and buy branded and astonishing products. As a result, people not only expend a large amount of money but also show their materialistic status in the society. Besides this, providing a great deal of discount on products by manufacturing industries through shopping sites allure people to buy unnecessary things in this jet-age of 21st century. Thence, online shopping services play a phenomenal role in order to make people spendthrift these days.
Multifarious points can be put down in this phenomena, the ratio of quality environment has been degraded due to rubbish such as plastic bags, polythene and carton. To justify, nowadays, people purchase more and more things which are packed into cartons and plastic boxes. Thus, after opening the product customer throw the waste material at landfill sites. Therefore, It has become a gagantic concern in front of society.
On the other hand, Initially, under the instruction of e- shopping, local business men have to face problem regarding sale of their products and financially. To demonstrates, people do not need to visit at the market for purchase distinct kinds of things as they buy through online services in the present of networking system. Apart from that, non biodegradable things release harmful gases which has become the serious concern in front of natural environment.
To recapitulate, lifestyle of folks has undergone dramatic changes over a couple of decades. Consequently, shopping has become “need of an hour”. Thus, online shopping has more negative outcomes than positive and therefore government and individual must take many proactive steps.
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Essay evaluation report
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 381 350
No. of Characters: 1976 1500
No. of Different Words: 218 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.418 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.186 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.722 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 157 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 120 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 85 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.143 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.85 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.619 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.29 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.509 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.046 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the masses') or simply say ''most masses''.
Suggestion: most of the masses; most masses
...gs in this high- tech epoch. Presently, most of masses are passionate in order to buy distinct...
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Line 3, column 344, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...al shopping sites such as amazon, jabong ,flipkart and so on. Hence, the majority ...
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Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... Multifarious points can be put down in this phenomena, the ratio of quality environ...
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Line 9, column 142, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ntly, shopping has become 'need of an hour'. Thus, online shopping has m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, hence, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, apart from, for example, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2066.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40837696335 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84075201103 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583769633508 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4699733605 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.380952381 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1904761905 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137048632194 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399154860594 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410957357557 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073382094753 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380080424412 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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