The trend of online shopping is increasing significantly. What effect does it have on the society in general?
The trend of online shopping is increasing significantly. What effect does it have on the society in general?
The online services has brought significant alters to our lives in recent years. Yet, there remain some tilts as to whether the overall influence of this cutting-edge technology has been positive or negative to society. This essay shall discuss the online trade trend and illustrate its consequences.
First and foremost, the Internet shopping is the latest trend that created by the human being. The primary reason we have to take into consideration that the online sale gives the opportunity to the consumers to save their times. For example, the people do not spend time for the shopping and are able to order their staple and outfits with the click of the mouse or tap a screen. Further and more importantly, they can be with their loved ones and divide the time to stroll with the family members.
Also, the online shopping has a more choice that the real trade centers. Clients are able to compare and find felicitous options that they desire. For instance, if the consumer searches the latest version of the smart phone he/she is able to surf Amazon or other official stores website. It gives the chance to compare a price, read all descriptions, find out advantages and disadvantages then decide which the good is suitable.
On the other hand, Web Wide Web trade has its own drawbacks. It jeopardizes to a consumer’s right. One particular salient example of that is quality of goods – the Internet user who orders the clothes are not able to try on it. The outfits that the consumer wishes to purchase sometimes do not fit in to him or her. Also, it is hard to identify computers or phones working process immediately when trader comes near your door. Consequently, they have to pay some fine or cover their service if consumers give goods back. It is a strike to peoples’ pocket.
A technique such Smart TV, washing machine, vacuum cleaner have to be double checked before the buying with appropriate specialists.
In conclusion, although there are a number of different points of view regarding this issue, I claim that online shopping carries on revolutionize but this system has to be more reliable and create a primary guarantee in order to embrace consumer’s trust.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
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Line 4, column 111, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...ent years. Yet, there remain some tilts as to whether the overall influence of this cutting-e...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... buying with appropriate specialists. In conclusion, although there are a numb...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, regarding, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1938.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96923076923 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7485648637 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571794871795 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.3637218044 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0909090909 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13636363636 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250310510106 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826074488154 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162611297409 0.0667982634062 243% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191327100985 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.331093144351 0.056905535591 582% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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