TV channels show more men’s sport than women’s sports. Why is this the case? Should TV channels give equal time for women’s sport and men’s sport?
Men's sports are being prioritized to be broadcasted on TV channels over female sports. The reason for this comes from the long-standing and continuing tradition of men's participation in this field. I, however, believe that there should be more a variety of women's sports shows to encourage the sportsmanship of women.
It has been acknowledged that tees tend to participate in sports more than women do because of their high competitiveness and fighting spirit. For example, history has shown that sports competitions to date, from soccer, marathons to boxing, have been largely dominated by men's presence as these forms of sport require strengthen, even violence on stage, which is evidence of why most sports programs are featured men. The women's sports movement has only just begun after the gender equality movement, but there is no long-standing female sports tradition. Therefore, it is not surprising that men's sports programs always occupy the spotlight on television.
It is necessary to broadcast many women's sports shows as this will encourage women to prove their strength more. For example, recent sports competitions have both men and women, which helps people feel that all genders can have outstanding sports performances, and this also creates fairness in sport when the both genders are equally welcomed to express their talents. Women World Cup has done well in its role when it has really honoured women's power in sports, which creates a great honour for sportswomen, and supports them to be more involved in this field. Not to mention, this encouragement will create a healthy society when both men and women are actively involved in sports.
In conclusion, the reason why men's sports are always more broadcasted about them has a long tradition of joining this field. I believe that there should be many shows about women's sports to create a fair sports environment and a healthy society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, really, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17741935484 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7660815382 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525806451613 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7682926752 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.461538462 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.571542700405 0.244688304435 234% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.225217983215 0.084324248473 267% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719309896409 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.383081001232 0.151304729494 253% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035475612026 0.056905535591 62% => OK
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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