The number of men and women should be received similarly to learn subjects at colleges. I totally agree with this trend because of some feasible reasons.
First, nowadays, the society is being more and more equal in the importance of male and female. The gap between men and women seem to shrink and almost insignificantly. Unlike in the past, women had not chances to study and had responsibilities for families. However, recent decades, the female’s right have gained the respect of the society and therefore, they have been able to have educational opportunities. Therefore, it is apparent that the number of two genders, can go to school the same in colleges to study subjects, is necessary.
it is easy to realize that all two sets have enough abilities to access subjects in schools. In particular, females have health and strong to major in whole sectors, in fact that, there are a wide range of women, who are astronauts or pilots, hard-working for everyone. Furthermore, gentles also prove their talent in some fields, which people thinks to belong to women such as cooking, dancing…therefore, it is not any reason colleges for limiting subjects as genders.
In conclusion, in my point of view, i agree that the colleges should be created opportunities to study for males and females students due to the social equal and talents of student.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... that, there are a wide range of women, who are astronauts or pilots, hard-working for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, similarly, so, therefore, in conclusion, in fact, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01769911504 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01176329507 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606194690265 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3101295525 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.090909091 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166269067708 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585820896194 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654328404968 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118599583483 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728986443969 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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