According to universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. Therefore, this essay will show some reasons of argument for and argument against.
Firstly, I will discuss about two reasons of argument for to begin with universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject becouse it will be balance of idea while studying.In general, there usually are different ideas between man and woman.These lead to , new ideas from different vision will happen . Another reason is it display that have equal of sociaty not eccept in each side . In addition, nowadays , the most societies become to accept ability of both in any way, then, if universities admit male and female equally in every subject, when entering admission, becouse everyone could study at any universities they wanted.
Secondly, I will discuss about one reason of argument against that is some subject not suitable for each other, for example, some subject of sports such as weight putting. It is not suitable for female bscouse there are different of body between male and female.
In conclusion, I agree with univedsities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. Moreover, it depen on what the subject that the students want to study, they can choose by themselves becouse I believe that if the students like to study their subject, they will do it well so that I strongly agree with this topic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in general, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04979253112 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53723294563 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522821576763 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.9390307154 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.222222222 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7777777778 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.4444444444 7.06120827912 247% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422581002076 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.215813047569 0.084324248473 256% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.206679901117 0.0667982634062 309% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281334923155 0.151304729494 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122551615778 0.056905535591 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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