Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every
subject.To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
It is often said that educational centres such as universities should accept men and women in an equal measure instead of making a noticeable difference between them. From my point of view ,I completely agree with this idea.
Firstly ,one of the main reasons for this argument is creating an equal situation among all genders all around the world. For example ,in most developed countries where we can find an equal system for studying at universities ,both females and males have adequate opportunities to present new ideas as well as study in a suitable space to have enough knowledge .It means all the population should understand there is no noticeable difference between genders. Therefore ,this makes it clear why accepting all genders in an equal measure is one of the most significant responsibilities that an educational centre has.
Secondly ,another noticeable reason is making powerful team works that compose either women or men. For instance ,to conduct an indispensable project related to mental disorders we can find various ideas that males and females can write to find methods to treat incurable psycho illnesses. To assemble both of them with each other as well as presenting these notes universities will witness a staggering advance. This would probably be due to the variety of thoughts that these populations can consider. As a result ,it becomes apparent there is a conspicuous reason behind each claim via societies that we can not ignore.
All things considered ,I strongly agree with this idea. I also believe accepting an equal number of women and men should be increased. It is predicted that to continue this activity via educational centres we will face all the population in the world have opportunities to study subjects in these places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14137931034 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82360737722 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579310344828 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.0133748549 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.692307692 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14587549769 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540891024511 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514543496003 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103279041109 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388155945366 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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