Is a university degree the best way to have success in life?
To pursue half-done dreams after high school, lots of students decide on keeping on going to university because they take that earning a university diploma is the key to get in on life for granted. Whether it is an accurate assumption or not is a knotty question. Personally, university degrees are not the superlative way but the most crucial element to facilitate having a perfect life.
On the one side, holding college diplomas is not the greatest way to be accomplished. Generally, the number of unemployed graduates increase over recent years. Though they have more than one Bachelor’s degrees even Doctorates degrees, they are still out of employment. Now, the recruiters are looking for applicants who are competent and well-qualified not for those who have a high-level degree but with low real capability, so proficiency, understanding, competence outweigh degrees. Besides, though some students ceased studying at the high school level, they can still become successful people. To illustrate, both of Bill Gates - a billionaire and a remarkable American businessman and Mark Zuckerberg co-founding the illustrious social-networking website Facebook dropped out from Harvard University to pursue their passion. They are particularly unique people who exemplify that without any university degree, they still make a splendid life with lots of admirable achievements and triumphs.
On the other side, the degrees of a university are useful powerful tools, assist us to fulfill dreams about a successful life. Indeed, there are no scarce of occupations, but seeking an ideal job with a high salary or have potential promotion without having degrees is not as easy as pie. As an example, an employer is deliberating a talented, competent, hard-working worker for a higher position. However, he misses this golden chance because of not owning any degree. In this circumstance, the worth role of a university degree is expressed.
In brief, whether going to higher education to get degrees is precise or not is contingent on each perspective which has its reasonable arguments. It could be argued that a university diploma is not the best way to be accomplished but there have no shorter way to get success than getting degrees.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, look, so, still, well, in brief
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1890.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32394366197 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11218715297 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0350050475 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.176470588 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8823529412 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41176470588 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406467332363 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110727662692 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111263566594 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251330829358 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464476864385 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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