The use of mobile phone is as anti-social as smoking. Since smoking is banned in certain places, using mobile phone should be banned as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As smoking in any form is believe to be an antisocial behaviour which is perceived to be prohibited, people also think that the use of hand set should also be banned. I strongly disagree with the sentence which says mobile phones should be prevented for use in the society.
On one hand ,smoking ìn the community is prohibited because it has so many health hazard that accomplished it such as respiratory diseases and heart problems. it has shown that as people smoke indiscriminately it make them sick and unhealthy then they visit hospital frequently. In addition, children might think that is right to smoke and they will be imitating people around them as they see them as role models. When such children reached adulthood they might be addicted to it.
On the other hand, there are lots of benefits again from the use of mobile sets to both individuals and the nation than banning its usage. Firstly, usage of phones gives us the opportunity to be exposed to western world and be oriented to how society. Without been present in a place information can be searched using the search engine on the internet. For instance, people in Nigeria knows what is happening currently in any county by just going through their phone. if phone is now ban like smoke this wiĺ be difficult as people will become less informed.
again , mobile telephones should be like unlike smoking, as phone help to strength family relationships and bridge distance among relations. people can easily pick up their phone and call the loved ones anytime if they are missing them by communicate with them , thus, promote love and prevent loneliness and this will not be possible if phone is ban like smoking as it's seen as part of what is causing antisocial habitat among people.
Finally, as smoking is believe to be prevented as it causes social deviants, mobile phones should be allowed as it does more advantageous things than the negative effects.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
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...ed for use in the society. On one hand ,smoking ìn the community is prohibited b...
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Suggestion: much health; a good deal of health
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...espiratory diseases and heart problems. it has shown that as people smoke indiscri...
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...hat as people smoke indiscriminately it make them sick and unhealthy then they visit...
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...d them as they see them as role models. When such children reached adulthood they m...
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...nefits again from the use of mobile sets to both individuals and the nation than ...
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...unty by just going through their phone. if phone is now ban like smoke this wiĺ be...
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...people will become less informed. again , mobile telephones should be like unlike...
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... should be like unlike smoking, as phone help to strength family relationships an...
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Suggestion: People
...ps and bridge distance among relations. people can easily pick up their phone and call...
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Suggestion: ,
...re missing them by communicate with them , thus, promote love and prevent loneline...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
... among people. Finally, as smoking is believe to be prevented as it causes social dev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, so, then, thus, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84848484848 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.599856512 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1462327674 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.285714286 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330410371987 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117016504524 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074699283103 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198042374585 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772536102434 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.