Using animals to test the safety of cosmetics or drugs used for medical reason is never acceptable.To what extent do you agree?
whether using animals in the purposing test biological experiment is a question that requires careful consideration. As a matter of fact, this issue which is accepted or denied is a curial challenge that made strong discussion . In this essay I will deal with this controversial argument and named some benefits and drawbacks which are related to this subject.
Some researchers which support the idea that by using animals we can estimate the bad effect for drugs.In addition,they believe that before one product is put on the market we should analyze the whole process which their body faced with.
More importantly, they grew up some special animals like mouse which has same DNA similar to human.Afterwards, the injected that new product or drug into their body and after some specific days they put the result of testing in a paper and predicted the future effect for humans.
However, on the other hand, there are some people who never accept this method.They believe that, animals like humans have the right of living without of any dangerous.We do not have the prompt to get the chance of living of any creature. Unfortunately,there are many struggle discuss among people and some researchers for this challenge.Instead of this method of using animals for medical purpose, they suggested alternative ways which are different from normal ones.The also invited some environmentalist to help them stop this strategy.
I partially agree with the second view.While the old method had brought some successful discovery,they faced with different criticize which never happened. I think that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, so, while, i think, in addition, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34615384615 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03795420459 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623076923077 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.4995207408 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.444444444 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8888888889 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8888888889 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145918210585 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059766292684 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516878499956 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077958094579 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232771805698 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.