Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
The recent survives carried out to determine in which elements there are a dire need for enhancing and should government take some steps. Finally, there are two comprehensive views were mentioned. In the first category, they insist the impact of economic progress. Secondly, they demonstrate the crucial of other progress besides the economic one.
Initially, the first view of some experts and normal people put the economic progress at the higher priority level. In addition, in their belief the administrators didnt devote sufficient movement to enhance the economic circumstances. In the result, usually critic the government actions and also sibling them as the main guilt due to lack of some budgets or other facilities. At the same time, they suggest to diminish other progress such as some construction for amusement activities or establishing sports complex and so on. An instead, soaring some activities to make their country much more dynamic in economic progress where they werent adequate for these problems.
On the controversy belief, other have totally diverse outline. On the closer examination, to correspond other progresses such as enhancing cinema and other amusing activities or some facilities to attracting tourists and make the tourism to has higher impact on country have the most debatable challenge which among them bring some struggles which one should be putted at the upper priority. That was exactly the same opinion which I prefer. For the mentioned progress a good example can be the improvement the rate level of well-being in some subjects like literacy or hygiene. At the concurrent, amending economic has relation with other types of progress. For example, solving the problem of unemployment maybe has the most explicit effect on the level of families economy.
In the conclusion, to make bond between progresses which are related to economy and others have play vital role before any decision. Also equate economy and other problems can solve many difficulties nowadays.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...on, in their believe the administrators didnt devote sufficient movement to enhance t...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest diminishing'.
Suggestion: suggest diminishing
...ther facilities. At the same time, they suggest to diminish other progress such as some constructio...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: weren't
...dynamic in economic progress where they werent adequate for these problems. On the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38170347003 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76918788033 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580441640379 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2331813274 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.352941176 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277349570409 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895942920902 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440939639399 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166566606478 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517142255908 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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