Using animals to test the safety of cosmetics or drugs used for medical reason is never acceptable.To what extent do you agree?
Whether using animals in the purposing test biological experiment is a question that requires careful consideration. As a matter of fact, this issue which is accepted or denied is a curial challenge that made strong discussion . In this essay I will deal with this controversial argument and named some benefits and drawbacks which are related to this subject.
Some researchers which support the idea that by using animals we can estimate the bad effect for drugs.In addition,they believe that before one product is put on the market we should analyze the whole process which their body faced with.
More importantly, they grew up some special animals like mouse which has same DNA similar to human.Afterwards, the injected that new product or drug into their body and after some specific days they put the result of testing in a paper and predicted the future effect for humans.
However, on the other hand, there are some people who never accept this method.They believe that, animals like humans have the right of living without of any dangerous.We do not have the prompt to get the chance of living of any creature. Unfortunately,there are many struggle discuss among people and some researchers for this challenge.Instead of this method of using animals for medical purpose, they suggested alternative ways which are different from normal ones.The also invited some environmentalist to help them stop this strategy.
I partially agree with the second view.While the old method had brought some successful discovery,they faced with different criticize which never happened. I think that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, so, while, i think, in addition, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 3.15609756098 475% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 5.60731707317 535% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 965.302439024 144% => OK
No of words: 260.0 196.424390244 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33846153846 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03795420459 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 106.607317073 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623076923077 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 283.868780488 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.4995207408 43.030603864 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.222222222 112.824112599 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8888888889 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8888888889 5.23603664747 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145918210585 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059766292684 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516878499956 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077958094579 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232771805698 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 61.2550243902 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 40.7170731707 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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