In the modern world there is a movement away from written exams to more practical assessment.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend
Whether assessing pupils by written exam or practical one is a question that requires careful consideration.Certainly, there are both favorable and drawback point backed to this subject.On the closer examination, I will deal with this argument to excavate these two methods.
As it mentioned above, there are some squadrons of people and researches who insist nowadays one of the significant phenomenon which we faced it, is environmental challenge.It is suggested to make and create an alternative way in which decrease the peril of the nature.As it can be understood, written exams cause to cutting down so many trees just for producing paper.In the recent research carried out to estimate the number of these destructions approximately one-third of the whole statistics devote in paper industry.
On the contrary, there are some supporters still emphasize that the written exams can take the keen of creativity for those who used this method.Another way of viewing, they believe we can measure our students activities by written exams to analyze the process of improvement to determine they are in the ascending trend or in a descending one.To sum up their out view
about the systematic assessment, they insure the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.As an ultimate tip, they temp other principal to use the old mechanism instead of new one.
For the following reasons, I partially agree the first out view thus we have this responsibility to care and respect our nature. And in addition, we should remain all these donees for the next generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, still, third, thus, in addition, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29718875502 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22602720012 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654618473896 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 195.322707333 49.4020404114 395% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 263.8 106.682146367 247% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.8 20.7667163134 240% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.8 7.06120827912 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138725822311 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645849063223 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538722749429 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728952095221 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441976747442 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.4 13.0946893788 217% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.28 50.2224549098 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 11.3001002004 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.35 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.01 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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