In the modern world there is a movement away from written exams to more practical assessment.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend
Whether assessing pupils by written exam or practical one is a question that requires careful consideration.Certainly, there are both favorable and drawback point backed to this subject.On the closer examination, I will deal with this argument to excavate these two methods.
As it mentioned above, there are some squadrons of people and researches who insist nowadays one of the significant phenomenon which we faced it, is environmental challenge.It is suggested to make and create an alternative way in which decrease the peril of the nature.As it can be understood, written exams cause to cutting down so many trees just for producing paper.In the recent research carried out to estimate the number of these destructions approximately one-third of the whole statistics devote in paper industry.
On the contrary, there are some supporters still emphasize that the written exams can take the keen of creativity for those who used this method.Another way of viewing, they believe we can measure our students activities by written exams to analyze the process of improvement to determine they are in the ascending trend or in a descending one.To sum up their out view
about the systematic assessment, they insure the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.As an ultimate tip, they temp other principal to use the old mechanism instead of new one.
For the following reasons, I partially agree the first out view thus we have this responsibility to care and respect our nature. And in addition, we should remain all these donees for the next generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, still, third, thus, in addition, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05019305019 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87994789786 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625482625483 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2564827911 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.615384615 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138961290476 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458802667548 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440499426315 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0733686175636 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439409296438 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.