Do good exam results at school or college guarantee success in life? Discuss. Do you believe that studying hard will bring a better life
Whether giving an exam good or disaster can be a good scale to measure people in a successful divided group or in an unsuccessful one is a question that requires careful consideration. In this essay, I will deal with this challenge and discuss about some features which play as important key role to make a person prosperous in the life.
Certainly, many people are the thinking the theory in which making connection between the adequate jobs and a period backed to the years ago when they studied hardship to get the highest score. In addition, they have this chance to qualify in their good occupations which have interested in from childhood. Approximately, three of quarters of mentioned group always be the first one in any subject in any lessons.
On the other cases, we had a squadron of people who got great grades but unfortunately do not have the same opportunity to detect good jobs. In result of this attitude, they did not reach to a proper life that in dreams feel it. They always denounce of the systematic and structure which divided people into the intelligent or weak in their educational time. So far, they suggested some new mechanisms to neglect personal background from school and college. Some examples of the mentioned suggestion can be seen in the special recruiting exam each company held annual.
I am taking the view, a person who had good scores do not outweigh to another who unaccustomed high grades. To extended this point, imagine a pupil whose family's economy had been in disaster situation and had to work and devoted his/her comprehensive life to this situation, the question is when he or she had sufficient time to do his/her homework?
Because of that it feels that we need an alternative way to make better life for all people from who are not successful get great grads to an unsuccessful one.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83280757098 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75217023158 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574132492114 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9802486632 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.846153846 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3846153846 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175500109844 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05537807741 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367129914649 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931527207558 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361248251649 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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