It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The recent surveys carried out to answer this question whether children are born with these mentioned talents in sport activities or such in a art like musician or not.In this essay I deal with these debates and on the closer exploration I mentioned some different views over this issue and give some solutions.
The First group argue that these abilities are addressed in children. In addition, there are lots of people who deprived of this capability.It is accepted by researches that this idea approximately true by researchers in DNA process which we inherited from our parents, whereas this theory face with some diverse problems. The biologist and genetic engineers have this idea that it can be possible these talents occurred suddenly without any background.
On the other cases, there are some biologist who insist all children have the equal talents. By detecting and improving their interest and fields like musician or sport can make them successful or unsuccessful. Also, it should be mentioned these talents and capabilities are not happen unless live in a situation which the experts and facilities are served with your favorites. I partially agree this term in which any child can be taught to be a prominent in a special field that he/she interested in.
Finally, there is a dire need of improving the general level of well-being and facilities due to prob the demands of the society and make a relation between the personal capacity and the personal talent for example in sport activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, so, well, whereas, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10040160643 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72318179733 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59437751004 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.3290228684 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.111111111 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251484541047 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094831361616 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415261442934 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145307040908 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376714071777 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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