t is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Some people said that having a good path in chasing after sport and music career is totally constituted by being taught. But I agree that the epitome of inherited takes a leading factor in becoming successful in becoming a good sport player or musician.
On the one hand, I concur to those who said that coming into a talent is a factor key to lead to the prospective career involving sport or music field since those who are in lucky to get it need less time to acquire knowledge as well as put what they have learnt into practice. As a result, they can have a good grasp of playing instruments or sports smoothly. Moreover, such people have the tendency of expressing their distinctive ability when they were little kids. It is really conducive to them, they were exposed to all of things considered to belong to their gifted, which help them be armed with essential solid platform very soon. For example, Mozart started to compose music when he was 6 years old and then his whole childhood was took advantage of having his head buried into music. At last, he becomes the most outstanding exponent of the eighteenth century.
On the other hand, others argue that being good at sport or music completely stems from diligent practice. Having the passion on playing sports and instruments can give them an advantage in pouring their whole time into that without any tiredness and hesitation. With effective practices and having an insight of what they are following enables them to gain admirable achievements.
While many opinions shown that throwing energy into practicing and acquiring skills can lead to a successful sport or music career. I believe that having been born with certain talents is a deciding factor.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 537, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'considered belonging'.
Suggestion: considered belonging
...hem, they were exposed to all of things considered to belong to their gifted, which help them be arm...
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Line 3, column 743, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...rs old and then his whole childhood was took advantage of having his head buried int...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, really, so, then, well, while, as to, for example, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85423728814 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50879521542 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589830508475 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2226835846 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.153846154 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241407631202 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920854779358 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615166487345 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170308331805 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053716780009 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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