Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is better environmentally and economically. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?
It is clear that with the flat of technological revolution, food miles gradually takes off despite environment and economic issues .While there are lots of drawbacks in consuming food produced locally, I would argue that the advantages of eating local food outweigh its disadvantages.
From environment perspective, sitting at home and waiting for their food ordered after clicking on the tip of fingers apparently requires the huge number of the freight transport across the world. The massive intensify of vehicles is the main reason leading to the climate change by releasing more and more emissions into atmosphere. From economic perspective, crops for export are always grown as mono-cultures, as a result, the quality of others will deteriorate and the government cannot guarantee a prosperous and sustainable development. For instance, deforestation in Amazon is exceptionally high recently, to raise cattle for beef exports is causing the loss of animals and even put some of them in the verge of being endangered.
But the other side of this coin stems from stimulating the national economy. Firstly, the consumption from inhabitants is big which is the motivation for the national enterprise focus on producing more and more items. More money will within the local budget instead of lining the pockets of shareholders. Secondly, if the national budget is scare, citizens find it hard to serve the high quality of life as well as welfare services.
To sum up, although consumers have the right to choose what they really like, I would argue that it will be better for the economy and the environment if they use domestic foods.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... despite environment and economic issues .While there are lots of drawbacks in con...
^^
Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
...espite environment and economic issues .While there are lots of drawbacks in consumin...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 718, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd even put some of them in the verge of being endangered. But the other side of...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19622641509 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92464759343 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630188679245 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.1527683207 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.7 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134983462787 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443731909356 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06196334352 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837216285697 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809236081111 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.