We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer technology. It is used in business, crime detection and even to fly planes. What will it be used for in future? Is this dependence on technology a good thing or should we be suspicious of its benefits?
It is true that we are using more and more on computers in different fields. From starting of the day to end of the day we are living with smart systems. In future, computers will have been used by various methods in effective way. Although we are relying on technology, multiple benefits outweigh its drawbacks.
People, to finish the work easily and quickly, they prefer to use the computer. There are the different things will be used in future. Firstly, smart classes and online teaching will have been implemented by the government soon. It helps to learn almost and pitch in for children to know the skills in better way. Secondly, government is in the process of imposing smart card facilities for all citizens. This advance step will help to catch the criminals quickly. Finally, in business sector, for example, decision-making and business guider software are used already by the different companies. Then, it would spread all over the place with small, intelligent and efficient computers.
However, these things greatly impact our life. This allows us to be more dependent for simple calculations. Our ancient people use their brain for solving manual calculation. But in today’s younger generations are using the computer even for basic methods. If the computer corrupted its functioning, dependent people would suffer a lot to do any work. Furthermore, computer is holding all our account and personal information and it should be continued in safe method. This is because our worthy information might be hacked by the online hacker who is doing illegal activity through online. Even though this problem might happen while we are using computers, it is more helpful to human who want to complete the work effectively in exact way and it makes our life more convenient for example, online banking method leads to save our valuable time. computer is the most necessary thing for people and it can’t be avoided completely.
In conclusion, using computers leads to do the work with support. I would argue that its negative consequences will be compensated by its benefits.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13411078717 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74632783035 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565597667638 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.707123987 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5652173913 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9130434783 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.60869565217 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343388401361 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970964292148 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620393649545 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203061450408 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449762348975 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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