Some people believe that unpaid community service be a compulsory part of high school programmes.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It has recommended that secondary school students should be involved in unpaid community service as a compulsory part of high school programs. Most of the colleges are providing opportunities to obtain work experience, however these are not compulsory. In my opinion sending students to work in community service is a good idea as it can provide them with many lots of valuable skills.
Life skills are very important and by doing voluntary work, students can learn how to communicate with others and work in a group and how to manage their time and improve their organisational skills. Nowadays, unfortunately, teenagers do not have some after school activities. After school clubs are no longer popular and students mostly go home and sit in front of the computer browse internet or play mobile games.
By giving them compulsory work activities with charitable or community organisations, they will be encouraged to do something more interesting. Skills gained through compulsory work will not only be an asset on their CV but also increase their functionality. Students will also gain more respect towards work and money as they will realise that it is not that easy to earn them and hopefully will learn to spend them in a more practical way.
Healthy life balance and exercise are strongly promoted by the National health organisation, students are spend the entire day sitting idle and doing nothing. It could also possibly cut the health illness. If students have activities to do, they will not be bored and came up with silly ideas which can be dangerous for them or their surroundings.
In nutshell, this is very good idea, and I hope this programme will be put into action for secondary school colleges in shortly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: spent
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, in short, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05574912892 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80616543702 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564459930314 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.663469908 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.615384615 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17081374148 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718565666211 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893898104759 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974081521912 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580881670539 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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