Opinions diverge on whether the good relationships between distinct nations are playing more vital roles as compared to the past by virtue of the accretion in the number of global issues. Although some criticize this sentiment, I starkly advocate it on account of some compelling reasons.
It goes without saying that there are multiple reasons why the nations should have good relations with others. One of the most cogent rationales is that one country can not receive the supply of food or financial when they get in troubles if they do not have good relaions with other nations. This is simply due to the fact that when they have to suffer from some natural problems such earthquakes, floods or tsunami, they do not have a close country to offer for funding in order to address the issues. This leads to the situation that they have to face the lack of financial and the diminution of economic.
Another point to further discuss is that having great ralations with others countries means that they receive the help whenever needed. Take India as an example when covid-19 hit the whole world, numerous countries were supported the vaccines and medical equipment from their friends but for India that did not have a good relations with others could not come over the pandemic and had to suffer a bad consequence. Thus, it is crucial to be friends with other countries to get the help in pandemic and economic.
In conclusion, it is perceptible that having good relations with other countries brings several benefits for each other such as the supply of food or financial, especially the assistance to solve the growing problems of the world. From my perspective, I strongly advocate that mentioned sentiment.
- The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950 Summarize the information by selectin and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 56
- Some people work for the same organization all their working life Others think that it is better to work for different organizations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 56
- The map shows how coastal land develops into a coastal park 61
- The pictures below show the process of making clothes from recycled plastic bottles Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'relation'?
Suggestion: relation
... but for India that did not have a good relations with others could not come over the pan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93079584775 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55707235524 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543252595156 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.9077330775 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.545454545 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2727272727 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153081586168 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577206573895 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320647184534 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907496149339 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221581587351 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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