As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the modern age, it is widely held that corporations should give considerable attention to their social duties, in addition to earning incomes. I strongly agree with this opinion since and the reasons behind it will be elaborated in the upcoming paragraphs.
First and foremost, if companies ignore their social responsibilities, the working class and the environment are likely to suffer. The first worth-mentioning fact perhaps is that numerous workers are being exploited for their labour and working under tough conditions due to the policy of the company. A prime example of this is the factory workers in China and Vietnam, who worked for multi-national companies like Nike or Adidas, are forced to labour more than 12 hours per day and only paid for almost 3 dollars per hour. This creates a detrimental impact on their health and impede them from spending time with their families. Moreover, an immense amout of pollutions and exhaust fumes, which are emerged from the manufactures, are causing severe effects on the natural environment. Thus, if corporates do not comply with the environmental-friendly policy and have responsibilities towards society, the pollution rate will tremendously worsen.
On the other hand, taking social responsibilities will not only help companies to earn profits but also bring about positive impacts in the long run. It is true that the companies which takes role in protecting the environments and the benefits of their employees will result in good reputation in the eyes of the public. This can also be regarded as an effortless method of marketing since companies can attract new customers and retain their existing ones. Furthermore, companies which can prove their contributions to the development of societies can attract more investment and support from the governments. In fact, many national authorities tend to invest their resources in the corporates which have green practices and high rate of staff satisfaction.
In conclusion, it is more favourable for businesses to implement plans which complies with their responsibilities of societies, as well as increase their profits.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40895522388 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19948481039 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591044776119 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1271571135 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 129.428571429 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0966391281313 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355128386811 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400327697952 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665220089793 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215911341297 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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