Nowadays, television plays an important role in our life. It has become an indispensable item of modern families, because of the great benefits that it brings about
Firstly, television helps you see more of the world and learn useful things because TV programs can broaden your knowledge. For example, we can know and understand different cultures and customs around the world just by staying at home and watch TV programs.
Secondly, after a hard-working day, when you feel very exhausted and really want to find a means of entertainment, TV is one of the best choices. You only need to sit down and watch your favourite TV program. It is an effective way to entertain yourself without spending too much money
For these reasons, I think it is an intergal part of our life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 644.0 1615.20841683 40% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 134.0 315.596192385 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80597014925 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 4.20363070211 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72954838667 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.723880597015 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 189.9 506.74238477 37% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9566695878 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127194750881 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650422881721 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618911732279 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0603084819304 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603181322615 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 78.4519038076 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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