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What are the effects of social media on business

Throughout the course of human history, the invention of the Internet and social media are turning points that completely modified every aspect of our lives. Apparently, in this day and age, employing and utilizing modern technologies must associate with the use of social networking sites. Consequently, it is not much to our surprise that nowadays enterprises tend to combine the use of social media with their strategies of development. It shows us that social media has several certain impacts on every business, namely on the products’ quality, integration, and most importantly, advertisement.
In the first place, participating in social platforms undoubtedly help businesses improve their products’ quality. To elaborate more on this point, we all have to admit that trends are always fluctuating all the time. If some individual cannot keep pace with the current trends, he or she will assuredly fall behind and possibly fail in his or her future affairs. Businesses’ products work in the same way. Businesses must update the latest trends, in order words, hop on in any trends that are currently available by improving and modifying their products under these circumstances. What is more, by taking advantage of social media, enterprises would grasp a variety of youngsters’ hobbies and then adjust their commodities to buyers’ interests which apparently have a positive impact on their turnover.
In the second place, it would be our loss if we did not mention that social media help enterprises integrate into both the local and global market. First and foremost, it is evident that in recent years, every sort of business ranging from start-ups to operations has their own accounts on social media. For that reason, it must be acknowledged that social networking sites are unquestionably advantageous environments when it comes to searching for investors and business associates in both internal and external areas. Also, enterprises could have a chance to refer to other businesses’ operating models and strategies as well. All things considered, the ones, which get involved in social networking sites, would integrate into the rest of the world and expand the sphere of influence in the domestic market. Thenceforward they could possibly reach out of the international areas.
The last and most important impact of social media on business might be the advertisement. In the era of the popularity of the Internet, it is obvious that each of us has at least one account on social media. Hence, utilizing the power of social media would help approach various sorts of buyers ranging from children to the elderly, which, without any doubt, promotes product branding. By creating as many astonishing pictures of products and fancy words about the products’ useful features as possible, it is believed that every brand would increase their revenue in total. What is more, not only are the products promoted but the upcoming projects among enterprises could be popularized as well. The more buyers care about a business project, the more successful that project is expected to become.
By and large, I pen down saying that employing the social networking sites undoubtedly has three positive impacts, including on their products’ quality, integration, and advertisement. Admittedly, in today’s world, I believe that it would be a big trouble if a business did not put the use of social media into their developing strategies in the long run.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 831, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'could'.
Suggestion: could
...the domestic market. Thenceforward they could possibly reach out of the international areas. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, consequently, first, hence, if, second, so, then, well, at least, sort of, by and large, what is more, in the first place, in the same way, in the second place

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 41.998997996 183% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2922.0 1615.20841683 181% => OK
No of words: 552.0 315.596192385 175% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29347826087 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84713113593 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94792859967 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 283.0 176.041082164 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51268115942 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 899.1 506.74238477 177% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5688312393 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.75 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331932421545 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100085385478 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684981696979 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200502021407 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021629623156 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 143.0 78.4519038076 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.67 Out of 6
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments