What can governments do to encourage children to eat more healthily?
Write at least 250 words to discuss the topic.
In recent years, diet-related health problems among children have been a pressing threat, demanding serious response from governments around the globe. This essay aims to discuss several feasible solutions to address tackle this issue.
The first method revolves around governments imposing restrictions regarding opening hours and physical locations of food stores selling unhealthy food items. For example, bubble milk tea shops should be forbidden from being around schools and only allowed to open during office hours. Obviously, this strategy would effectively restrict pupils’ access to these shops and send a clear message about the detrimental effects affiliating with these sugar-rich drinks to both schoolchildren and their parents. However, in this era when access to the Internet becomes relevant to citizens of all ages, placing an online order or call for delivery can still help both the milk tea shops and their young loyal fans to bypass the rules.
The second solution places more emphasis on how formal education can catalyze a fundamental change in children’s diets for the better. A good example here is that the ministry of education may allow primary schools to include cooking in their official curriculum in their education settings with learning contents being preparing nutritional meals using little to no oil and sugar. This will encourage young learners to internalize the notion of healthy foods and consequentially, relay the positive message to their parents. Unfortunately, this initiative has inherent drawbacks encompassing everything from preserving raw materials to lacking both in specific equipment and professional skills.
The last idea is depicted with the help of viral advertisements. Children tend to idolize prominent faces of the entertainment world and emulate their behavior. For this reason, the combination of household names, infectious catchphrases and visual presentations of meals that are made of greens, fruit and low-fat food items for TV commercials can surely encrypt young citizens with the habit of consuming sufficient nutrients on a daily basis. This seemingly perfect recipe, however, will have to face fierce competition from major packet food brands that also utilize celebrities’ star power to maintain their sales among youngsters.
In conclusion, with each strategy bearing distinctive strengths and weaknesses, the authorities should flexibly apply each of the suggested solutions to help reconfigurate children’s diet options, of which hopefully, healthy ingredients will take center-stage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, regarding, second, so, still, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2217.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.8188976378 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03398677378 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650918635171 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.5951494567 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.8 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0686746770072 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0248066937104 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275764372901 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0407048249276 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201435619167 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.77 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.76 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 78.4519038076 181% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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