What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?
An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?
The online shopping platform has a vital role in nowadays world economy. Due to the network system, people from different places are now brought together into one community. Communication with others are more convenient. People from different places can easily access to an online market. However, there are both advantages and detrimental effect to each online shopper in different ways, depend on how we use it.
Online shopping help reduce time and cost. When customers can simply contact the seller, initiating production and delivering are faster than to place an order face to face. Thus, there is no need to spend extra budget on transportation. For instance, online shoppers need to pay for delivery, which is cheaper compared to shoppers who need to pay for their budget on travelling between shop and home. Moreover, Online advertising is cheaper and easier for many companies too. On the other hand, some online store’s security policies are not strict enough that lead to fraud. Since scamming is a rare occasion, number of online shoppers tend to rise.
While online shopping is on an increase, the local products selling rate seems to be stable. The reason for this situation is because lesser people shop on online platform rather than a local store. With that being said, to encourage people to buy local products, local stores can contribute their shop by joining an online shopping platform. This way shopper can conveniently reach your local store and improve your selling rate.
To conclude, online shopping platform can improve the shopping experience with how convenient and simple to reach by shoppers. It can also revolutionize local store in a well known store. While disadvantage can occur, trading goods with no bad intention can prevent such indecent situation from happening.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...line shopping platform has a vital role in nowadays world economy. Due to the network syste...
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Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...e stable. The reason for this situation is because lesser people shop on online platform r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21917808219 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60185637497 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58904109589 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6826425592 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2105263158 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3684210526 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63157894737 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302076731979 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094487015458 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726959710976 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175572651392 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750697920447 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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