When asked to choose between a life without work and working most of the time, people would always choose not to work.
Do you agree or disagree with this?
Employment is defined as a person’s trade and is often associated with a significant amount of pent-up stress and underappreciated contribution. However, despite its setbacks, working tends to be an escape from one’s ordinary and repetitive life cycle. Therefore, I wholeheartedly disagree with the perception which favors a life without any work duties.
Although there exists a wide range of reasons to oppose a work-free lifestyle, the primary rationale is due to the dread and mundanity that life brings. Without work, people tend to lack the ambition and motivation that propel them forward in order to reach certain goals that they have laid out for their milestones. Subsequently, work offers people a sense of accomplishment and achievement which play a huge factor in developing their self-identity. Furthermore, the absence of work will turn an eventful life into a dull and tedious one which several individuals may undervalue and underappreciate. Consequently, work can be seen as an approach to get away from the monotonous life.
Apart from the aforementioned explanation, the desire for acknowledgement and contribution, a human nature, also attributes to the disagreement for this proposed trend. To elaborate, it is human nature to seek contribution to society for the trade of acknowledgement. Hence, without work, such ambition is inhibited and cannot flourish to the maximum potential. In particular, all lines of work, though however insignificant, have their own purpose and can make their own contribution to the community. For instance, doctors provide treatment and prescriptions to ill patients with the aim of diagnosing and curing their illnesses. In turn, this will offer them a desirable reputation and recognition from the people.
To recapitulate briefly, this reinforces my perspective that work should not be perceived negatively. Instead, it should be promoted and prevailed over a wearisome and monotonous life due to numerous merits it accompanies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, apart from, for instance, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5606557377 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39246204253 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613114754098 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.3043466091 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263763462382 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086125105501 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605961934793 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157869694282 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561919435024 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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