When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Selecting a job is significant for everyone because people would spend a huge amount of time working in their life. I agree that how much you can earn from a job is important, while there are many other factors that job seekers need to think about.
In my opinion, a good salary is one of the most attracting reasons why people choose certain jobs. The decent income would release financial burdens on people’s shoulder and ensure people can afford rentals, bills and groceries. For example, thousands of young people want to work as a doctor due to the goof salary so that they can improve their living standards and lead an affluent life. By contrast, without enough incomes, employees may need to find new jobs or even have work after hours to make a living. Under such circumstances, people would feel tired of their jobs sooner or later and will not stay long in their company.
On the other hand, I believe that there are three main aspects that need to be included in job consideration. Firstly, job hunters normally care about if the job can bring with many potential opportunities to get promotions in the future. For some people, the prospect of career developments, rather than the salary, is a stimulus to work hard and devote their time and energy to companies. Secondly, the working environment, such as how comfortable the office is, influences people’s decision making. Finally, employees also see the relationships with supervisors and colleagues as an essential part because this is what impact on people’s moons every workday.
In conclusion, there are a variety of factors that people need to consider when they face a job selection and the salary is only one of them.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90311418685 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66976937029 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612456747405 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.0094962255 49.4020404114 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148762987226 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526897525904 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479988792077 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100145083169 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262796240503 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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